How's My Driving

[indigo_league]

EVALUATE MY BATTLING!

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Comments

Kit | Heather Mason and Wrath

[foolishwren]

Heather and Wrath have private HMDs here and here, respectively!

[rambling_runner]

Let me say that I'm always in awe of your Heather. It's so clear that she's grown and changed during her time in Johto, but I can always immediately go to any cutscene in the game and think; "Yep, that's Heather. That's the girl hanging out in Johto." I think you do such a good job not just showing her thought processes but doing it in such an 'in character' tone, if that makes any sense.

While I can't compare Wrath to canon, I love how you describe his thought processes. It makes it easy to follow his own brand of logic and helps explain his outlandish/unusual behaviour, and why he does the things the things he does.

[foolishwren]

Oh jeez, let ME just say thank you so much!

That honestly means so much to me. Our little fandom doesn't really get many people drifting in this direction and the fact that you came in cold turkey and like my interpretation is so validating!

And as for Wrath, that ALSO means a lot-- he's much more of a side character in canon than Heather is and it's really important to me that I make him believable and relatable despite the fact that he's... well, an anime monster child.

Thank you again dude! It's a pleasure being in the same cast as you. <3